Wednesday, May 2, 2012

A portion of a larger work

So this is just a small excerpt from a longer work I'm creating now. The chapter title design was a complete rip off from Joe Matt. The page where I'm on the bed is the influence of Tatsumi over me, with his contemplative and reclining protagonists. Should I color this? What do you think about it overall? I need some dialogue. Sample color page on the right.

I just had to delete a page because it was an unedited version that was saying something I really didn't want to say... Mistake. I just changed that and delted the colored version cause it is no good.